literature

Dark Eye

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He picked up the blade,
And a scar was made.
Your cries were the music
To his twisted art.

He wrapped you in chains,
Convoluted your brain.
Set you free only when
You didn’t want to go.

You have such a dark eye
That you cannot see the light.
Everywhere you go,
the pain cuts you to the bone.

You’re battered and burnt
And expecting much worse,
He killed without
Taking your life.

I pray that we find him one day,
And we give him a little taste
Of the torture and pain for which he’s to blame
And the dark-eyed view that he made.
Is one turned out surprisingly well. It's inspired by a very interesting girl I know because her hazel-green eyes look dak in photos, and she's also a bit tortured. She also has a twisted way of seeing things that I love. I tried to get all of that in here, as well as openly showing what she only hints at.
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PoeticPurity's avatar
That is so sad, and yet so beautiful